In my dream i danced with an Angel,
the music played i was in awe.
For it was while we daced i finaly realised,
i could never ask for more.
The way she held me was so gentle,
in her arms i felt at ease.
Gone were all my worries and my troubles,
with that Angel i had no fears.
She spoke gentle words of tenderness,
as she whipered in my ear.
You are the one who won my heart,
you are the reason i am here.
She told me i would soon be waking,
and would have the best suprise.
And how wonderful the moment i woke up,
she was there before my eyes.
For the Angel i had been dancing with,
was the lady in my heart.
And a wonderful way of telling me,
she had loved me from the start.
So my love is never ending,
as the heavens have let me see.
The one i chose to spend my life with,
is you who was the Angel that danced with me

So beautiful Scouse..I still love reading all your poems

Originally Posted by velvet

So beautiful Scouse..I still love reading all your poems

So do I...

They are so so beautiful and touching...
very sensitive...

sometimes I cry, other times just muse and enjoy...

They always inspire and motivate me to try to be more sensitive...

They leave me in awe of the gift you possess Scouselad and the generosity with which you share it with others...

I do so enjoy reading all of them and am so grateful you post them here...

I am so often left so speechless that I do not respond...

Other times I feel it may detract from their beauty or sound patronising etc...

Yes Scouselad
Thank you so much for sharing this gift with us...

Thank you for your comments as i do enjoy writting poetry and must admit i realy enjoy the comments that people leave and i dont mind what people say but im happy when i have been left good comments as i feel i am stuck in the middle of something as being 39yrs old i can remember when poetry was heard in my younger years but now in my older years i have rarely heard it or when i have heard some young people talking about it they were just making fun of it. I am not an aggressive person just a quiet type of guy who enjoys making people smile and i think poetry has a way of doing that and Kamilla you are welcome to write anything you want about my poetry just so long as it wont make my head swell LOL

Originally Posted by scouselad

Thank you for your comments as i do enjoy writting poetry and must admit i realy enjoy the comments that people leave and i dont mind what people say but im happy when i have been left good comments as i feel i am stuck in the middle of something as being 39yrs old i can remember when poetry was heard in my younger years but now in my older years i have rarely heard it or when i have heard some young people talking about it they were just making fun of it. I am not an aggressive person just a quiet type of guy who enjoys making people smile and i think poetry has a way of doing that and Kamilla you are welcome to write anything you want about my poetry just so long as it wont make my head swell LOL :)

Being 39 is great... purrfect...
Ah I remember when I was 39...

Maybe I should have stayed 39 for the past two decades??? lol

Nah nobody would believe that...
not without an xtreme makeover, lol

my 'younger years' was 39... lol...

what do you think of people 60+???

geriatric years? lol...

I know of many 'young' (as in younger than 20) enjoy and appreciate poetry...

So please do not think it a reflection on you, your poetry or poetry in general, but their inability to appreciate...


As if anything I write could do that... lol

Anyway I can write nonsense rhyme as you may have noticed on some thread Newdawn started... then I spoke in rhyme all the time, sounding like a loon that swallowed a spoon...
crazy lady all aflutter surely was a right nutter...

that's easy...
but poetry is not simply rhyming couplets...

It's a gift...

It does not come easy to me, as I tend to do 'flow of consciousness' and that sounds weird...

But on occasion, now and then, when in deep emotional anguish, I write to 'vent', it may actually be almost poetry as simple rhyming couplets emerge...

I did have ago here once but deleted pretty much straight away...
felt it detracted from the previous poster's piece...

It was about 'true love' (my faithful dying dog's love for me) and the adoration etc in their eyes, too teary at times,
You know that 'unconditional love' a dog has? indescribable...
My attempt did not do it justice...

I write jingles... not poetry...